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Re: An Amazing Poem
You could totally turn this into a haiku - it has seventeen syllables! Like this: Today I glanced at a tangerine. It was green. The tangerine screamed. Of course, it's ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Mask
Hey! I like how mysterious this poem is, and you know what I think would be great? A second poem - like, a separate poem altogether, like a sequel, that ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Me Against Myself
Hi! I like your idea for this poem but I think it's a little difficult to follow. If you could separate the two voices more clearly, I think that would ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
The title of this poem drew me to it, and I was not disappointed! I love how sort of humorous this is, though still with a touch of sincerity, and ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
Hi! I feel your emotion through this poem but I think that some parts of it are a little cliché - comparing tears to rain, for example. As Lavvi said, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Senseless
Hello! I think this is a good start and where you put your explanation that the person gets cut off by a bullet could be really good. But if you ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Behind Closed Doors and Inside Loud Houses.
Hello! Sorry if I repeat anything that's been previously said, but if I read other people's comments I might not review anything for fear of not saying anything new! I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
Ooh, cool! Can I be the man himself, Matt Bellamy?
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Spectacular
I'm not going to be around in the day! :( But I'll try to get some reviews done in the evening when I get back.
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Happy Easter!
I played Portal 2, watched my boyfriend try to fix my nephew's laptop, and went over to my friend's house for pizza and a Coronation Street Tram Crash marathon.
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: what font do you like to use?
Calibri! I don't like Times New Roman.
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
None of my email notifications are working. I have it set to notify me when I get a PM, and I'm also subscribed to a lot of topics but I'm ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: twistfaint<3
Hi! I love your tone in this piece. It just sounds really good when I read it in my head. You use some really good description an imagery, and... I ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Never Back Down
Hi there! Firstly, I like the message your poem sends, so that's a plus. And your format is fine, but your first and last lines are a lot longer than ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Hi My Name Is
This is a pretty original idea - I've never read a poem from the point of view of an emotion before. The first line sounds slightly too casual but I ...
Apr 5, 2011
